ORIGINAL FICTION · CONTEMPORARY

The unclaimed coat

A lost-property clerk wants a coat's owner to keep calling even after the storage room closes.

Published 11 min read · 2,419 wordsHowCurio fiction
A lime-green wool coat hangs from a navy peg beside an empty claim tag.
Original story illustration.

The phone rang while Leon was trying to put a fishing rod in the umbrella bin.

“That has a reel,” I told him.

“It also has a handle.”

“Put it with sporting goods.”

“We have a sporting goods bin?”

I pointed to the lowest shelf. Leon bent to look, and I answered the phone before the third ring.

“South Depot lost property. Walter speaking.”

“Is one eighteen behaving?”

June Mercer always asked it that way. I turned toward the shelves, though I had checked her coat twenty minutes earlier.

“No escape attempts,” I said. “Still on its peg.”

“Good.”

The coat hung in the back row, lime-green wool against a navy peg. Someone had put a clear garment bag over it after the first year. The bag had split near the hanger, and a strip of green lining showed through the coat’s open hem. Its cardboard claim tag had a crack across the second one in 118.

On the first Tuesday of each month, I kept my lunch under the desk until June called. She was rarely more than half an hour late. That morning I had bought soup, which was cooling beside the phone, and a pear Leon had already advised me to throw out.

“How’s the basil?” I asked.

“It produced four leaves. I used three. I’m considering letting the fourth retire.”

She had mentioned the plant in February, growing in a chipped mug on her windowsill. Since then I had meant to tell her about the driver who found a potted fern in the rear seat of the number six. The passenger came back for it before I arrived at work. I had saved the story for her.

A sheet of paper came through the slot beneath our door. Leon retrieved it, read the top, and held it where I could see the depot manager’s signature.

“I’m calling because of the letter,” June said.

I looked again at the heading. Storage room closure: November 30.

“We sent those yesterday,” I said.

“So it’s real.”

“Yes. The room closes at the end of the month.”

“I can’t get to South Depot by then.”

I ran my thumb along the ridged edge of the metal ruler on my desk. “Let me find out what collection arrangements we can make. I’ll call you back.”

“I’d appreciate that. I do want the coat.”

“I know.”

There was a pause, just long enough for me to hear an engine start beyond the loading doors.

“Thank you, Walter,” she said.

After she hung up, I entered the date and time of the call on the claim sheet. Leon was still reading the notice.

“Five years?” he said, looking at the coat’s intake date.

“Nearly.”

“Does she live far away?”

“I don’t know.”

He glanced at the phone. “You sound like you know her.”

“I know which coat is hers.”

Leon set the notice on my desk. He had put the fishing rod in sporting goods, where its handle stuck out far enough to catch his trouser pocket when he passed. He freed himself and went to ask the driver of the number six about a missing lunch cooler.

I lifted the lid of my soup. A skin had formed on top. On a yellow scrap by the phone, I had written fern so I wouldn’t forget to tell June. I folded it once and put it in my pocket.


The storage room had been ours for forty-two years, according to a plaque nobody intended to move. Its shelves smelled of damp wool and the dusty moth traps tucked under each row. The company was turning the room over to maintenance. At the new counter, staff would hold ordinary lost items for a shorter period, with overflow going to a central store.

For the closing inventory, Leon and I checked each item against its tag. He was learning the counter before I moved there full-time in December. He could remember a passenger’s face after one conversation and could not remember that claim numbers belonged on the outside of a bag.

“Would you call this gray or brown?” he asked, holding up a felt hat.

“Brown.”

“It looks gray.”

“Then write gray.”

“You just said brown.”

“The owner may know it better than we do.”

He wrote gray felt hat and placed it in a carton. By late afternoon we had cleared two shelves. Every time I reached the back row, the green coat brushed my sleeve.

June had never told me where she lived. I knew she took a bus to work on some mornings because she once called from a stop and had to hang up when hers arrived. I knew she disliked the word garment and called 118 “my awful coat.” I knew about the basil. I could not fill out a delivery address for her, or say whether Saturday was easier than Monday.

Leon held up the inventory sheet. “What’s the plan for one eighteen?”

“I’m checking the options.”

“You said that at lunch.”

“I have not had lunch.”

“You know what I mean.”

I took the sheet from him. The space beside 118 was blank. We had three approved dispositions to record: collection, transfer for collection, or disposal after notice. I knew the broad categories, but transfers had gone through another office for years. I would have to ask which counters could accept one and how long it could stay there.

That evening I walked past the manager’s office with the sheet in my hand. The door was open. The manager was on the phone, and I went home.

At my apartment I found the yellow scrap in my pocket and laid it beside the kitchen sink. The fern had belonged to a woman who boarded with two shopping bags and left carrying neither plant nor bags. The driver thought she had retrieved everything. I had seen the bags on his seat that morning. I still couldn’t tell the story without making it longer than it was.

The next day I asked at the front office who handled transfers. After I wrote down the name, I looked at June’s number on the claim sheet. I could call her first, I thought. If I brought the coat myself, neither of us would have to sort out the transfer. I had Friday off and a car. The idea kept returning while I worked through the morning’s claims.

Just after two, I used the desk phone.

“June Mercer.”

“It’s Walter, from South Depot.”

“Oh. Did you find a counter?”

“Not yet. I wanted to ask you something.” I could hear a cupboard close at her end. “I could bring the coat to you on Friday. On my own time. If you gave me an address, I could drop it off.”

The line went quiet.

“You mean come to my home?”

“Or somewhere nearby. Wherever you’d prefer.”

“Walter, I don’t want you to do that.”

I pressed my finger against the ruler’s edge. “Of course. Sorry.”

“I called the depot about a coat. Please find out about the counter.”

“Yes. I will.”

She thanked me, with none of the small amusement I had grown used to hearing, and ended the call.

I wrote customer declined personal delivery in the contact notes, because the next person handling the claim needed to know it wasn’t an option. I read the words once before closing the folder. Leon came in from the platform, complaining that a bus had arrived with a box of wet scarves and no explanation of where they came from. I gave him an empty tray and asked him to keep them apart from the dry ones.


The transfer coordinator answered my call the following morning. She named three counters that could accept 118. One was only a few miles from South Depot. Another was in Bracken, on the far side of the county. She checked the closing dates and confirmed that June could collect there on a Saturday.

I copied the choices onto a card. Leon watched me make a second copy.

“You’re writing the same thing twice.”

“One goes in the claim folder.”

“Why not use the copier?”

“It wrinkles these cards.”

“Everything wrinkles these cards.”

I called June during my usual lunch hour. She answered, but she didn’t use our usual opening.

“I found two counters with time before the deadline,” I said. “One at North Exchange and one on Pine Street in Bracken. There are Saturday hours at Pine Street. You can choose either one. The clerk there will handle the claim.”

“Pine Street,” she said at once.

“All right. Which Saturday?”

“The twenty-first. I can get there around eleven.”

I wrote it down. “I’m scheduled at Pine Street that morning to help set up the new counter. Another clerk handles collections. If you’d rather come on a day I’m not there, I can give you the other hours.”

“The twenty-first works.”

I gave her the address and hours, then repeated them when she asked. I told her the coat would stay at South Depot until the transfer was recorded.

“Will it still be in that big plastic bag?” she asked.

“Yes, unless the bag tears more. We can put another around it.”

“Please do. The lining comes out of the hem when I carry it.”

“I noticed.”

“My mother called it traffic-signal green,” June said. “She had a diner across from South Depot. When I told her I wasn’t taking over the place, we argued for most of the afternoon. I left town that week, and I left the coat on the bus. I don’t want to walk past the diner to get it.”

“You don’t have to. Pine Street is confirmed.”

“I bought it because she hated it,” June said. “That wasn’t a good reason, but the wool’s warm.”

I waited, in case she wanted to say more. She asked me to read back the date.

When the call ended, I wrote her choice in the folder and passed the transfer request to the coordinator. It was approved that afternoon. I took a fresh bag into the storage room and eased the coat off its peg. The old bag caught on a wooden splinter; I pulled it free without tearing the wool.

The coat was heavier than it looked. Damp wool rose from the collar as I lifted it, though the cloth was dry to my hand. The loose lining slipped below the hem and brushed a dusty moth trap on the shelf. I set the coat down, moved the trap, and tucked the lining back inside. There was no reason to pin it. June knew it was loose.

The tag broke when I tried to untie its string. I put both pieces in a clear sleeve, marked the bag with the claim number, and checked the number against the folder before closing it. Leon came in holding the gray felt hat’s claim card.

“Brown hat’s owner,” he said. “She says it’s charcoal.”

“Did she take it?”

“Yes. She recognized the stain inside. What do I put on the sheet?”

“Collected.”

He set the hat’s old card on my desk and looked at the bag. “That the green one?”

“Yes.”

“I thought it would be greener.”

I shifted the bag so the transfer label faced out. “You can tell her that on Saturday.”

“Absolutely not.”

He helped me carry the remaining cartons to the front room, then left at five to collect a grocery order before the store shut. I stayed long enough to check the transfer against the closing inventory. The coordinator had confirmed the transfer for Saturday.

The phone sat quiet beside the ruler. I took the yellow scrap from my wallet and dropped it in the trash. June had a date now. I was glad I had found it for her, though for the rest of the shift I kept looking up when anyone came through the door.


Pine Street’s counter stood beside a glass wall overlooking the bus bays. Every arrival shook the pens in their cup. When a bus pulled out, hot brakes sent a sharp smell through the door each time a passenger opened it.

I arrived early on the twenty-first with the transfer bag. Dalia, the regular Saturday clerk, checked it in and put it behind her counter. I spent the first hour finding places for forms and explaining to Leon over the phone why a passenger could not collect a wallet from a counter that had never received it. He had opened South Depot that morning and sounded as if someone had already asked.

At ten forty-eight I straightened a stack of claim forms. At ten fifty-three I did it again. Dalia looked over.

“They’re straight,” she said.

“I’ll leave them.”

“They’ll thank you.”

At eleven six, a woman in a dark blue raincoat came through the door. She paused for a departing passenger, then approached Dalia’s counter. Her hair had flattened under the rain and she was holding a folded bus schedule in one hand.

“June Mercer,” she said. “I’m here for a coat.”

I recognized her voice before Dalia found the folder. June looked toward me when I turned. I gave a small nod and stayed where I was.

Dalia completed the identity check, brought out the bag, and opened it so June could see the coat. June pulled one sleeve free. A button knocked against the counter.

“That’s it,” she said. “You found a new bag.”

“The old one had torn,” Dalia said.

June ran her fingers over the wool at the cuff. “It’s as ugly as I remember.”

“It’s yours, then.” Dalia finished the claim and handed her the receipt. June folded it into her wallet. Dalia passed the bag across the counter, and June took it by both handles.

I waited while she settled the weight against her hip.

“June,” I said. “Would you like to get coffee with me sometime?”

She met my eyes. “No, thank you, Walter.”

“All right.”

“Thank you for getting the coat here.”

“You’re welcome.”

She turned toward the doors. I stepped back to let a passenger with a suitcase reach the counter. Dalia asked him for his claim number, and I found the blank form he needed.

Outside, June stopped beside a bench to gather the bag’s handles in one hand. Green lining had slipped below the coat again. She pushed it back through the opening, lifted the bag clear of a puddle, and climbed aboard the waiting bus.