ORIGINAL FICTION · GENTLE FANTASY

The umbrella repair shop

A dishonest umbrella repair shelters a fruit seller from disappointment and leaves his daughter unheard, while the shop begins to leak.

Published 12 min read · 2,450 wordsHowCurio fiction
A dark blue umbrella with a green stitched panel hangs above a puddle beside a repair-shop awning.
Original story illustration.

I had my thumb braced against a bent steel rib when Mr. Vale said, “I need it to keep out disappointment.”

“Just yours?” I asked. “I charge extra for a whole family.”

He did not smile. Rain ticked against the shop window, and his navy umbrella lay across my counter with one lime panel brighter than anything else in the room. Someone had sewn that panel in by hand. The stitches wandered, but they held.

“My daughter and I are meeting this afternoon,” he said. “I asked her to help at the fruit stall for another month. I think she’s going to say no.”

“Then you might be disappointed.”

“That is what I’m trying to prevent.”

I ran a finger along the rib. Its outer joint had folded inward. Near the handle, the little loop I called the return eye was still open. I showed it to him, because I always showed customers the return eye.

“A feeling sheltered under one of my umbrellas comes here,” I said, tapping the chipped jug beneath the counter. It held an inch of rainwater already. “When you lower the umbrella, what you’ve put off can find its way back. This gap keeps the journey gradual. Close it, and nothing comes back even when you lower the umbrella. The jug has to hold it all.”

Mr. Vale glanced at the jug. “You’re saying I’ll still feel disappointed later?”

“I’m saying I repair umbrellas, Mr. Vale. I have never managed to repair a Tuesday.”

He looked out at the wet pavement reflected beneath my awning. “How much?”

“Twenty-eight dollars. If I can make that rib sound.”

I had one sound rib of the right length in the drawer. It was reserved for a larger job on Friday, a shelter against stage fright for a woman who had already paid a deposit. My supplier would bring more next week, provided I could afford his minimum order. The money in my tin was meant for that order. The money in my till was meant for rent.

Mr. Vale counted out twenty-eight dollars in damp bills and laid them beside the umbrella.

I straightened the damaged rib as far as it would go, leaving his bills on the counter where I could still have returned them. I bound the joint with waxed thread, testing it once, then twice. It flexed poorly. To keep it from catching the lime panel, I drew the fabric tight across the return eye and stitched it down.

The umbrella opened smoothly because I’d pinned the damaged joint in place.

“It’s safe now,” I told him. “Try it outside.”

Mr. Vale stepped under the awning and raised it in the rain. Water slid off the navy cloth. He looked toward the market lane, where his daughter’s fruit stall stood opposite my shop, and his shoulders eased.

“That’s a relief,” he said.

I watched him cross the pavement. He kept the umbrella low, protecting his collar and the folder under his arm. At the corner he met his daughter, Ivy, who had a canvas bag over one shoulder and her hood up. She pointed toward the stall. He nodded, cheerful already.

Back inside, I put his money in the till. The jug had risen another finger.


Ivy sold fruit on Wednesday and Saturday mornings, though the stall belonged to her father. She had her own job during the week, repairing bicycles in a workshop by the station. Once, while I was replacing the tip on her umbrella, she told me she liked the workshop because people usually knew which part had broken.

At three o’clock, she and her father sat at the stall’s narrow table. They had chosen it for their meeting because the rain kept customers away. From my doorway I could see them between the hanging crates and hear them when the delivery trucks stopped passing.

Ivy spread several sheets of paper on the table and held their corners down with apples. Mr. Vale rested his umbrella against his shoulder, still open. Rain blew through the side of the awning and speckled her pages.

“You brought the weekly figures?” she asked.

“I brought what I had.” He opened his folder. Inside were two leaflets from a produce wholesaler and a photograph of a handsome display of pears.

Ivy turned the photograph over. “Dad. The figures.”

“They’re at home. We know roughly what comes in.”

“I asked for the last three months. I need to see whether you can pay someone for Saturdays.”

“We can work that out after you tell me how many more weeks you can do.”

She took her hand off the apple. One page lifted and dragged across the wet table before she caught it.

“I told you today was when we worked it out.”

“I know. I’m here.”

The jug behind me gave a soft knock against the cupboard wall. I went in and found it nearly full. Water beaded along the shelf above it, though the roof overhead was dry. A drop fell onto a box of brass tips.

I moved the box. Another drop landed where it had been.

Across the lane, Mr. Vale was talking about the busy season. Ivy was looking at him, waiting for him to notice that she had stopped answering. His face stayed pleasantly open. He reached across the table and moved an apple off her paper as if that might help.

The repair was catching every little hurt that belonged to him, including the one he ought to have felt at seeing hers.

I picked up the jug. It sloshed over my wrist. I could not tip it into the street. Water poured away from one of my umbrellas always found its owner again, but all at once, at the worst possible moment. That was why I kept a return eye open and a jug in the shop.

By the time I set it down, water was running from the top of the cupboard to the floor.

I crossed the lane with no umbrella and arrived in time to hear Ivy say, “I paid for a pottery class on Saturdays. I’d like to go. I’d also like one morning when I can fix my own bike, buy groceries, or do nothing if I choose.”

“Of course,” her father said. “We’ll make room for that.”

“Tell me which Saturdays you’re hiring someone.”

“I don’t know yet.”

“Then I’m done after this week. I’ll show the new person how the stall works if you find one. I’m not opening it next Saturday.”

Mr. Vale looked surprised by the firmness of it, but not troubled. “Let’s not settle that in a rush.”

“We had a month to settle it.”

She slid her papers into her bag. Rain spotted the top sheet before she could close it.

“Ivy,” I said.

She turned. Mr. Vale turned too, giving me the same bright look he had worn when he left my shop.

“I need the umbrella back,” I told him. “The repair I sold you was faulty. I closed the return eye. I knew I was doing it.”

His fingers tightened around the handle. “You said it was safe.”

“I did.”

Water dripped from my hair onto the table. Ivy looked from me to the lime panel.

“I sewed that in when I was sixteen,” she said. “He caught it in a car door.”

“You did a better job than I did today.”

Mr. Vale lowered the umbrella a little. Rain touched his shoulder and he raised it again. “Has it made me say something I wouldn’t have said?”

“I can’t tell you that. It has kept something from reaching you. The rest came from you.”

Ivy tucked her bag against her side. “Dad, I asked you for the numbers four times before today. The umbrella didn’t leave them at home.”

“No,” he said. His voice had lost its agreeable lift. “I left them.”

“I’m going to the workshop. Please don’t come there.” She pulled her hood farther forward. “When you’ve done the accounts, call me after six. I won’t discuss Saturdays again.”

She stepped out into the rain and crossed toward the station. Mr. Vale watched until a bus drew between them.

“I thought she’d stay and talk,” he said.

“She told you where she’ll be.”

For once, he had no reply ready. He closed the umbrella, and together we carried it back to my leaking shop.


The jug was full. Water ran down the cupboard door and spread across the floorboards in a thin sheet. Mr. Vale set his folder on a dry stool, then lifted the box of brass tips while I fetched a basin.

“Does this happen often?” he asked.

“Only when I do a particularly expensive piece of bad work.”

I gave him a towel for the floor and placed the umbrella in its stand beneath the open window. Rain reached the navy cloth. He stood beside it while I cut the stitches I had put across the lime panel. The waxed thread came away in short, stubborn lengths.

The return eye opened. Water streamed from the jug into the basin, although I had not tipped it. Mr. Vale caught the edge of the counter.

“Are you all right?” I asked.

He shook his head.

I let him have the stool. He sat with his hands between his knees, looking toward the market lane. The water continued to run. It slowed when the jug was half empty, then fell in separate drops.

“She had drawings in that bag,” he said at last. “She tried to show me one when I went by this morning. I said I’d see it after we’d talked business.”

“She may still have it.”

“That isn’t the point.”

I put the basin by the door. Once he had felt what the eye released, the water lost its pull toward him. I could empty it into the drain, though it was heavy enough to need two trips.

Mr. Vale stared at the photograph of pears in his open folder. “I knew the stall couldn’t pay someone without changes. If I put the figures on the table, she would see it too. I thought if she agreed to another month, I’d have time to think.”

“I can mend a rib,” I said. “I can’t make that month yours.”

He rubbed his wet sleeve over his forehead. “You really do charge extra for a family.”

“I was joking when I said it.”

“I know.”

The bent rib would not survive another opening. I took the sound one from my drawer and fitted it in its place. It was the last that matched this frame. Mr. Vale held the fabric out of my way while I secured it, and once or twice we had to wait for his hands to steady. I stitched the lime panel back where Ivy had put it, leaving her uneven seam visible around mine. The return eye remained clear.

When I opened the umbrella, it gave the small, decisive click a sound frame makes. I set it under the window for a minute. The jug did not rise.

Then I counted twenty-eight dollars from the till and my supplier tin.

“I paid for the shelter,” Mr. Vale said.

“You paid for one that worked properly.” I put the bills into his hand. “My receipt says a blocked return eye gets a full refund. I owe you the repair as well.”

He folded the money once. “The umbrella works now?”

“It will keep most disappointment off you while you’re under it in rain. Lower it when you’re ready to hear what came with you.”

He looked through the window at the lane Ivy had taken. “I should go home.”

“Yes. Your figures are there.”

He put on his coat and left the umbrella closed until he was beyond the awning. I watched him carry it over one arm through the rain.

That evening he returned without it. He asked whether he might use the dry end of my counter for half an hour. At home, he said, the kitchen table was covered with boxes of fruit he had forgotten to put away. I lent him the space and a pencil. I did not lend him my adding machine, which made a dreadful noise when its ribbon slipped.

He counted receipts. Twice he started over. At six he called Ivy, got no answer, and went back to counting. After seven he wrote a message. He showed me the screen, perhaps because I had been watching him erase it for ten minutes.

I’m sorry I came without the figures. I’ve done them now. I’ll close the stall next Saturday while I look for help. Could we meet Tuesday after six? I can bring the receipts.

“That sounds like something you can do,” I said.

He sent it. While he waited, he sorted the receipts into months. His phone lit up when the pile for August was nearly straight.

Tuesday at six. Bring them. I’m still not doing Saturdays.

He read it, put the phone face down, and finished August.


On Friday morning I called the woman with the stage fright umbrella. I told her I had used the rib I had reserved for her job and could not finish by evening. She took her deposit back and found another shop. After I replaced the money in the till, my supplier tin held enough for thread and nothing made of steel.

Mr. Vale’s stall was shut. A card on its counter said it would be closed Saturday too. Beneath it he had pinned a notice asking for morning help, with the hours written large enough to read from my doorway.

Around noon, a woman brought in a plain black umbrella with a loose tip. She wanted it mended before the rain grew heavier.

“Five dollars,” I said. “It’ll take ten minutes.”

“Could you put something in it as well?” she asked. “I have an interview, and I’m nervous.”

I opened the umbrella and checked its ribs. One was beginning to wear at the joint. I could secure the tip, but I had no sound rib to give a shelter its return eye.

“I can make it keep the rain off your sleeve,” I said. “For the other part, you’d have to come back next week.”

She thought about it, then set five dollars on the counter. “My sleeve will do.”

I tightened the tip with waxed thread. Outside, a bus rolled through the small puddle beneath my awning, disturbing the reflection of the lime panel hanging in my window. I waited for the bus to pass before opening her umbrella once, checking the tip, and handing it back.