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Original paragraph
Join our drawing afternoon on November 7 at 2 p.m. We have space for 10 people. Materials are included, so you do not need to bring anything. Register soon.
Exercise source facts
The event calendar says Saturday November 14, 2026, from 2 to 4 p.m. Eastern Time. The room booking has 12 seats, and the example organizers set capacity to 12 participants. Paper and colored pencils are supplied; attendees bring an eraser. The organizer's registration deadline is Monday November 9, 2026, at 5 p.m. Eastern Time.
Four complete review threads
1. November 7 at 2 p.m.
Comment: Taylor, please confirm the date, end time, and time zone from the event calendar. Is November 7 still current?
Read Taylor's answer and the resulting wording
Reply: The event calendar lists November 14, 2026, 2 to 4 p.m. Eastern Time. November 7 is from the old reminder. Use November 14 and include the end time and time zone.
Resulting wording: November 14, 2026, from 2 to 4 p.m. Eastern Time
Close this thread after the resulting wording appears in the document.
2. 10 people
Comment: Lee, does the room booking limit us to 10 or 12 participants? Please give the capacity we should put in the announcement.
Read Lee's answer and the resulting wording
Reply: The room booking lists 12 seats. Use 12 participants; the 10-person figure was the draft estimate.
Resulting wording: Space is limited to 12 participants.
Close this thread after the resulting wording appears in the document.
3. you do not need to bring anything
Comment: Robin, which supplies are provided and what must attendees bring? Please compare this sentence with the materials list.
Read Robin's answer and the resulting wording
Reply: The materials list includes paper and colored pencils. Attendees bring their own eraser. Replace the sentence with those two details.
Resulting wording: Paper and colored pencils are provided; please bring an eraser.
Close this thread after the resulting wording appears in the document.
4. Register soon.
Comment: Taylor, what exact registration deadline should we publish? Please include time zone.
Read Taylor's answer and the resulting wording
Reply: Registration closes Monday, November 9, 2026, at 5 p.m. Eastern Time. Use that deadline.
Resulting wording: Register by Monday, November 9, 2026, at 5 p.m. Eastern Time.
Close this thread after the resulting wording appears in the document.
Completed paragraph
Join our drawing afternoon on November 14, 2026, from 2 to 4 p.m. Eastern Time. Space is limited to 12 participants. Paper and colored pencils are provided; please bring an eraser. Register by Monday, November 9, 2026, at 5 p.m. Eastern Time.
A closed thread can still leave a wrong sentence
If Robin's answer appears in a resolved thread while the paragraph still says you do not need to bring anything, reopen the supplies thread. The needed eraser is still missing from the announcement.
Use the packet in your own document
Copy the original paragraph into a practice document, select each quoted passage, and add a comment. The download contains all four comments, replies, and the completed paragraph as plain text. It does not create Google Docs comments automatically.